2011年1月17日 星期一

Emma希望與大家說的話 15 - 七言絕句

作者: AKDcsee (林葛) 看板: Gossiping
標題: Re: [轉錄][校園] Emma希望與大家說的話
時間: Mon Jan 17 02:53:29 2011




孟秋時節入寢間,

鄰女纖性擾吾眠。

譴夫越檻輕打窗,

恐嚇屬虛未曾言。


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